17 tips for writing an intoxicating email newsletter

Somewhere deep in the dusty corridors of an ancient Aweber account...

Covered in cobwebs and left to rot...

Are some of my very early email newsletters that I wrote to my StoryLearning list.

Emails about language learning... written in 2013.

I still have those emails, you know.

And when I look back at them today, I think two things:

First: "Aww... how cute!"

Second: "WTF were you playing at!??!"

It's obvious to me that I was trying hard to be "helpful and nice". But it's also obvious that I had absolutely no idea what I was doing with email.

The proof of this was when I launched my first product.

The first time I ever sold anything to my list.

And I remember clearly the first reply I got:

"I'm unsubscribing! I'm going to follow a proper language learning blog!"

My big lesson?

If you send the wrong emails, you can build a big list of people who will never buy a thing from you, and will even get offended when you try to sell something.

Luckily, I picked myself up and dusted myself off.

Then, I set about spending the next 10+ year learning to write an email newsletter that builds an audience of buyers.

And today, I wanted to give you 17 specific tips to write in a way that creates a readership full of people who understand what you've got, and want it bad:

  1. Only cover one main concept in each email (a short email with a specific takeaway is better and more memorable)
  2. Demonstrate, don’t explain
  3. Tell stories, don’t teach
  4. Write to a specific person with a specific problem at all times
  5. Break up the text on the screen with short sentences, line breaks, bullet lists etc to make it easy to read
  6. Send more emails. (3-4 /wk is ideal, daily is even better)
  7. Know your USP and reference it throughout your writing
  8. Before sending, send yourself a preview email and read it on your mobile (that's how most people will consume it)
  9. Use images to help the reader visualise the transformation you offer with your product
  10. Write to the level of an 8-year-old (Seriously... it's much easier to consume information on a screen when you're not wading through Shakespeare.)
  11. Give copious examples of what you teach (from yourself and others)
  12. Whatever quirks, hobbies, idiosyncrasies you have -- use them in your writing! (Don't suppress them)
  13. Relate everything back to your proprietary system or method
  14. Routine point people to your other content online (e.g. YouTube videos) -- it builds trust fast
  15. Talk about your personal life. (It makes you real)
  16. Write the most fun, outrageous subject lines you can
  17. Dial up your personality to 11 (Be 2X the person you are in real life.)

There's a lot more than 17 things to get right in email, obviously.

But this'll get you started.

Namaste,

Olly